Some cities have vehicle-free days when private cars, trucks and motorcycles are banned from the city center. People are encouraged to use public transportation such as buses, taxis and metro on vehicle-free days. To what extent do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
whenever we see around us we feel that day by day life is getting difficult .even we can't find time to spend with our family. Due to busy shdule we even not go out for shopping some time because we think that if we will go out we will face a huge rash of trafic. Even though we avoid completely to go out, sometimes we miss our important events.
Now government took step to resolve this problem and they decided not to allow buses, cars, and moter bikes in the city centre. According to my opinion, it's a good attamp towards the betterment of the public .everywhere we see so many cars who not come city centre for shopping, they just park there cars because they can't find parking place to near their offices or near the place where they want to go for their work.so they park their cars in the city area rather than their offices. which can become a big cause of road blocking. However, the people who come for shoping they face difficulty to move in.
Another big issue, which we mostly face that people park their cars in wrong directions, if we need to move from the parking place we face difficulty.
I appreciate! this step which is taken by the government because I think in the long run it will be give fruitful result. No doubt, that it seems difficult but with the passage of time we will be use to for it. To advocate my point of view, I have so many reasons. Firstly, I am in favour of this decision because if private vehicle will not allow for 2 days then mostly. people will use local buses, we can save our petrol .it is good that we can save our money to use local buses.
Secondly, the most important thing which we need is to keep our environment clean. Less vehicle on the road mean less pulsation, so we shold encourage this step because for the human being paluted environment is dangerous. Thirdly, the most important and precious thing which we waste on rushing road is our time. If we use buses it's mean we are saving our time .we can't find much vehicle on the road and that will helpful for us to reach our destination.
In short, we should fully support to this step.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, i think, in short, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 24.0651302605 278% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 394.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33502538071 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.211083841 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494923857868 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.0039845876 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8888888889 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8888888889 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0880705920062 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0328364424388 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0292962714665 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0452307243036 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327654563016 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 50.2224549098 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 12.4159519038 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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