Some cities have vehicle-free days when private cars, trucks and motorcycles are banned from the city center. People are encouraged to use public transportation such as buses, taxis and metro on vehicle-free days. To what extent do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
In some cities vehicle-free days’ activity has started to signify and encourage the people not to use the private cars, truck and motorcycles in the city center which make them realize the significant difference due to the less usage of private cars, trucks and motorcycles. People are encouraged as an alternative of using public transportation to travel from one place to another.
As nowadays continuous research is going on that how to provide the pollution free environment to the human beings. According to the researchers, they have observed that vehicle pollution is one of the reason to give preference to the public transport during their root cause analysis. As far as benefits of public transportation are concerned, we may notice that huge number of vehicles cause of excessive harmful gases in the air which are exhausted with smoke. These toxic gases contain harmful CO and NO which make our respiratory system weaker gradually may cause of dangerous diseases in future. Furthermore, another advantage of using public is to reduce congestion on the road. People have to face lot of problem due to the heavy traffic on the road which take long time to stuck-up in the traffic. One of the major benefit is also to reduce the no of accidents as well. Due to the huge no of traffic on the roads also cause increase the risk factor for accidents.
As an alternative of private vehicle, people are encouraged to use the public transportation which will make it easy for people to move around to fulfill their daily routine tasks. As public transport makes it convenient for people to travel easily but on the other hand people have also to face the difficulties due to the public transport like to wait in the queue for the buses and metros. Buses are overcrowded during the peak hours and sometime do not find the seat to sit even for long distance traveling. Besides extensive traveling, some people are old age which is hard for them to stand in the bus due to the limited no of seats for disable persons.
To sum up, comparing the both merits and demerits of vehicle-free days, we may observe that using public transport has less disadvantages comparatively. Activities like vehicle-free days motivate the people to think for the alternative to reduce the unnecessary traffic on the road to make the environment free of harmful gases and also emphasize the Government to realize to arrange the affordable best alternatives for public to travel easily and to provide the maximum facilities for them to make their life easy like by increasing the no of buses and to increase the no of routes for buses ,metros and finally by initiating the cost effective taxis for passengers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 879.0 1615.20841683 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 168.0 315.596192385 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23214285714 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12625825009 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.732142857143 0.561755894193 130% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 506.74238477 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 56.0 20.2975951904 276% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 291.291759047 49.4020404114 590% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 293.0 106.682146367 275% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 56.0 20.7667163134 270% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163913143527 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747172368344 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737344343154 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163913143527 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.2 13.0946893788 238% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 6.18 50.2224549098 12% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.3 11.3001002004 233% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.11 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.4 10.1190380762 241% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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