Sports have become an inevitable part of every society. Accordingly, companies take sponsorship of them in order to advertise their products and companies. While some believe that it is the best way to the advertisement, others think this could have negative effects.
Some insist on this is helping companies to sell their products and services. Lunch of the new goods, for example, the football team on an International game wear a new design of their shoes that the sponsor company produces so that it is an increase in their sell when they target a new group of people who watch the game.
On the other hand, it is argued that support athletes or sports teams could be a leading factor for companies' financial crisis. For instance, sports players whose businesses invest lots of money on them get involved in a scandal or disgraceful situation, like using drugs or attending inappropriate parties, so that sponsor loses their popularity among the people and has to pay huge amount of fine for cleaning up the shocking incident.
Although, companies may lose money if their teams or sports icons get into moral trouble, in point of my view advertising products or services via sponsorship is very efficient. Obviously, people have a favorite sports team or athletes, so that they follow them in social media or competition and they see what they wearing, drinking or advertising, so they buy the exact product and raise companies' sell rate.
In conclusion, I believe that the advertisement industry has been improved over the years and firms attempt to use everything in this business even sponsorship of sports.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, if, may, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0594795539 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77534627607 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591078066914 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.5394093349 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.1 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.9 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199568401959 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834716272475 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624084951472 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104052623382 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663150975106 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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