Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while others think there are disadvantages to this. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
These days, many businesses prefer to sponsor sports to Increase their sales turnover. However, people are divided on their opinion. Some consider that sports can bring plethora of benefits for companies as well as sports committees. While others believe that it can damage sports spirit. In my opinion, it’s advantages outweigh the disadvantages. However, the latter cannot be underestimated. This essay explores both views and extract a conclusion at the end.
To start with, sports sponsorship Has endless advantages to both, companies and sports committees. Firstly, companies can promote their products and services in front of numerous people. For an example, the famous beverage company named “Coca Cola” sponsored the last Olympics. In return, they expanded their sales to three fourth of global population in just two years. Secondly, sports committees or councils rewarded the players with valuable prizes and develop the sports. All of this is done by the sponsored money. Therefore, it is evident that sponsoring the sports help both parties.
On the other hand, opponents regard this harmful for the spirit of sports. They believe sports and money should be kept apart from each other. In other words, when players are keen on money than sports, they damage the quality of the game. In the result, scandals such as match fixing become common. Moreover, players start using performance enhancing drugs to fulfill sponsor’s demands. For instance, two Australian cricketers were banned for lifetime because they were using drugs. Furthermore, sponsoring provide gate through to undesired companies. To illustrate, cigarette brands are prohibited from advertising in sports, but commonly alcohol beverage brands are found sponsoring “Rugby” matches. Hence these problems cannot be ignored.
In conclusion, this essay discussed merits and demerits of sponsoring the sports. It is useful for companies and sport councils in number of ways. Despite of the benefits, there are a lot of negative aspects. Such as, harm to the sports spirit as well as individuals. Sports authorities and government need to implement rules and regulations to overcome these drawbacks. So that maximum of sponsored is positively spent for the sake of sports development.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 235, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...companies as well as sports committees. While others believe that it can damage sport...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 719, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...d sponsoring 'Rugby' matches. Hence these problems cannot be ignored. In...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in other words, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1948.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58166189112 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85296184731 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598853868195 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 16.0721442886 180% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.7886188453 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.1724137931 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.0344827586 20.7667163134 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.10344827586 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223949171753 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578785302689 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456549878919 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145523247763 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496763279947 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.2 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.