In today's world, obesity is going to be the top notch of human being health problems. The result of this phenomenon would be some serious disease such as heart attack, high blood pressure and etc. Undoubtedly, this issue has emerged from some different reasons which might be intertwined. This essay is about to take a deeper look at the causes and the possible solutions to this problem.
Firstly, the huge number of new technologies introduced a new sedentary lifestyle to people. Those who used to be active because of the necessity of life now invented a vast majority of machines which are able to take care of their needs. For example, thanks to the washing machines, we no longer need to wash cloths and dishes by hand. Thus, our habits have changed due to the comforts that advanced technology has brought us and many of our compulsory activities do not exist anymore.
Secondly, foods that people consume these days are full of unhealthy ingredients such as fat, salt, and etc which might lead to overweight. In other words, before this people mostly ate homemade dishes besides fruit and vegetables. However, nowadays fast foods have found a way to people dish table which is another reason for obesity
In terms of solution, to cope with this issue there are some straightforward solutions to vanquish. First of all, a new lifestyle must be given to those coach-potatoes which includes too much gym activities. Therefore, the comfort that technology has brought us will no longer lead to overweight. Secondly, the nighty-gritty of people reliance on fast foods is a catastrophe which needs to be cut. The awareness that medias are able to give to people could be here a possible solution. Hence, not only people should do exercises to be healthy, but also it is important for them to have an organic diet.
By way of conclusion, although living in this advanced world is much more comfortable, this way of living can result in many illnesses if we do not find solutions for its drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, such as, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88304093567 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.703057836 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587719298246 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3852587712 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2352941176 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1176470588 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.88235294118 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136511835952 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044810807847 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326774429091 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0700146063657 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426812990315 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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