completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. on the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Education and experience are two factors which are considered in applying for jobs. Some may value experience over education and vice versa. However, it seems that the chosen career field will dictate how education and experience stack up against each other.
On the one hand, some recruiters are more willing to accept candidates with relevant education. They believe that they could get experienced while working. Knowledge stands out to them more than experience. In order to learn theoretical points, people should invest time in universities. They could not get them in work environments. An academic education was recognized as the best route to a well-paying job.
On the other hand, many wonder if a university degree is still worthwhile investment while they are losing the opportunity to work at a full-time job. If they have to leave a job while studying, then the total cost per year would be their university tuition and their salaries. It seems to them they can acquire more money including the years that they have to spend in universities. A work place is a location where they can get practical lessons and they can also earn money at the same time.
To conclude, it seems there is no employer preference between education and experience. Employers do not just want job seekers graduating from top universities, they also want relevant experience, however, the value of degrees can outweigh job experience in some fields or vice versa. This significantly depends on the applied jobs.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 20, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun wonder seems to be countable; consider using: 'many wonders'.
Suggestion: many wonders
... well-paying job. On the other hand, many wonder if a university degree is still worthwh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, still, then, well, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1263.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11336032389 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80901063364 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603238866397 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8008715357 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.9375 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4375 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4375 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192009180482 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062258054563 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323065358722 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116158745063 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033543918842 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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