Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
It is considered by a stratum of society that, a person stands a better chance of getting placement are after finishing a higher degree. While others believe experience along with working on the expertise is valued more. In my opinion, people should complete their studies because it will help them in to get satisfied wages and job.
On the one hand, people accomplish their education achieve superior paradigm in their life as per my point of view. Furthermore, they are not only always in demand by numerous companies but also the pay package is high compare to a person who has not given priority to studies. For instance, according to The Boston Consultancy, 80% more opportunities in the firm are given to them who are coming from higher educational backgrounds. Moreover, the job market is wide open to choose the work as per desire.
On Contrary, working on skills and gaining experience are given more preference because some jobs do not require to be educated they are purely based on the practice. For example, being a carpenter does not need to be highly skilled, they should be practising more and more work so that they can be a hands-on expert in their filed. Additionally, over a period of time by doing the same type of work an individual becomes master without studies.
In conclusion, there is a difference in the view of getting experience is highly important for better job prospectus or education should be priorities. In my view, although in some work-position studies are not that essential, it vital that one should focus on completing their education so that they are getting a better job with excellent salary as well as for self-wellbeing.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, while, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89084507042 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81072165449 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56338028169 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4580544103 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.75 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8333333333 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242073895935 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887773893312 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626849670547 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149848062314 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501437481713 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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