Some countries invest in specialized sports facilities for top athletes but not for the average people.
Is this a positive or negative development?
Sports are always considered to be a priority for many nations since it is a pride to be recognized in front of others. However, the funding for such activities are exorbitant high for maintaining the level of competition, at the same time, the country ignores the investment for citizens of the country. In my perspective, financial assistances offered to sports category has negative ramifications on the life of the public.
No dough players offer worldwide recognition but at an exorbitant cost since they have to maintain the level of competition with others. Whereas the basic rights of publics are not met such as the fundamental need of education and medical. After spending highly on sports activities the government left with minimum amount to invest in necessary infrastructures like hospitals and schools because of which thousands of them are illiterate and die due to lack of medical needs. For example, in-country like Brazil, they host the Olympic Games but at the same time, the poverty ratio is very high in the country. Therefore, the authorities should initiate flourishing the games but also other sectors like education and medicine.
Secondly, when it comes to gaming it is also taken into consideration that the players must be well trained as well as the state of the art infrastructure facilities with all the high-end equipment which again involves extravagantly funding. But many states in India do not even have 24 hours of electricity in the house and even the road conditions are not to the mark. The government should equally invest in the wellbeing of the nation because is it equivalently necessary of an average people to have a healthy lifestyle with all the basic needs.
To conclude, nations should also be looking into developing their country equally with all the facilities on should have like hospitals, education and many more rather than only investing in special games. Such a practice can help to develop them in all the field of excellence.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 358, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'sport'.
Suggestion: sport
...ctive, financial assistances offered to sports category has negative ramifications on ...
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Line 3, column 729, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er sectors like education and medicine. Secondly, when it comes to gaming it is ...
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Line 5, column 124, Rule ID: STATE_OF_THE_ART[1]
Message: Did you mean 'state-of-the-art'?
Suggestion: state-of-the-art
...ers must be well trained as well as the state of the art infrastructure facilities with all the ...
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Line 5, column 552, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...thy lifestyle with all the basic needs. To conclude, nations should also be look...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, whereas, for example, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09451219512 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89138696909 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536585365854 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.3654103151 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.538461538 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2307692308 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201820714489 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638799513568 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640385073514 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125215595416 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759021017474 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.