In some countries the elderly are highly valued and respected, while in others youth is more highly valued. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
It is common that each and every person deserve respect in some parts of the nation the old generations are given more importance. However, young people are treated superior in other parts compare to anyone else. In my point of view, older persons have knowledge and experience so they should be respected.
On the one hand, aged people have seen many seasons in their life and with the age, they have gathered valuable pieces of information. Additionally, not only they know most of the things like traditions or culture but also they can tackle the situation in crisis, which is an art to learn from them perhaps, that is the reason the grandmother remedies are so famous. For instance, In India still, most important ceremonies like wedding, housewarming and many more are not done without the blessing from the elders in the family. Therefore, it is necessary they must be treated well and responsible.
On the other hand, youngsters are most given more value in some states because they are enthusiastic and eager for learning in life. In other words, when it comes to work company’s preference is towards the youth due to their strength moreover, due to the age benefit working long hours would not affect them. For example, Canada these days allowing migration to their land because they have less young pollution in their country and that will have an adverse effect on the economy. Thus, the youth are valued more since they have the advantage of being strong and fit.
In conclusion, each country has its own benefits for respecting old or young stratum of people. As per my perspective, younger can be physically healthy or work but it is essential that we should not forget our values and respect elders. Since they are well deserved and have collected knowledge over a time.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88562091503 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51216230766 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581699346405 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8765535243 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.785714286 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2142857143 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138322136186 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519686560591 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528195762611 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0874288325043 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455945383513 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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