In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Metropolitan countries have seen an increasing number of single living compared to people living style in the past. In my perspectives, living singleton can lead to consequences than staying with someone.
On the one hand, the benefits of living by themselves is that they minimize on the expenses and can save a lot of money. More the responsibilities more the burden of fulfilling it. However, it becomes an unnecessary burden since not all are of the same likes and dislikes and often lead to conflicts among each other and can cause a detrimental effect like domestic violence in the house. For example, in western countries, more and more people opt for staying alone because they do not want to reliable for anyone else.
On the other hand, humans are social animals they always want to be surrounded by people. Furthermore, it has adverse effects like an individual suffers from depression since they are alone and no one to interact with them. Additionally, nobody is there to take care of them if they become ill. For instance, according to The World health organization, they say on average 80%, of the population, suffer from mental illness since there is no one to talk and share the burden. As a result, many of them prefer to stay nearby family or with friends so that the need arise there should be someone with them.
To conclude, these days many want to live alone and that’s the individual’s choice due to avoid additional expense. However, it is essential that human should be together to alleviates the consequences of depression and anxiety.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 25, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun want seems to be countable; consider using: 'many wants'.
Suggestion: many wants
...ne with them. To conclude, these days many want to live alone and that’s the individual...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, for example, for instance, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90977443609 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78567116138 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582706766917 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0392004477 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.461538462 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148182695141 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528677996684 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576819227187 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100407192821 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575842105828 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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