Some people think that radio is the best way to get news while others think that television is better for this purpose. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
A section of society believes that the FM channels are the constructive source to present the news. However, others argue that TV is far better to form to obtain the info. In my opinion, both are good in a way, but transmission suffices the need for getting the news since it is portable.
On the one hand, the images shown along with the broadcast which enhances the quality of worldwide updates. In other words, it makes it interesting to see the story with the pictures and not just to hear it. Moreover, it is necessary to see the footage so that a person can relate and it increases the seriousness. For example, The BBC research says that 89% of people prefer watching the news on television since it is essential to be seen by the eyes’ live. Therefore, the numerous amount of people are in favour of watching the news on a television
Nevertheless, in my view, when it comes to a purpose for just getting updates than radio is the superior way of this. Which is because it is portable one can hear about the information from anywhere not like TV whereas the not only connection is compulsory but also a set. Furthermore, unlike the idiot box, it as no interruption like ads FM channels telecast news without any breaks that to 24 by 7. For instance, the survey conducted by The National Broadcast association says that 80%, fastest is the radio when it comes to telecasting any story. Hence, the purpose of the news is fulfilled by FM faster than the Television.
In conclusion, it is more important to get the news than the sources which can be any means, the motive of the same is fulfilled by the transmssion which is why it is preferred to get easy and quick updates than TV as well it is convenient.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 552, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...our of watching the news on a television Nevertheless, in my view, when it comes ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in my view, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54340836013 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68600204063 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514469453376 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7606210499 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.692307692 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9230769231 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.6153846154 7.06120827912 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22600312409 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733640925296 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792908317932 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127005668806 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500365628494 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 552, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...our of watching the news on a television Nevertheless, in my view, when it comes ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in my view, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54340836013 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68600204063 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514469453376 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7606210499 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.692307692 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9230769231 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.6153846154 7.06120827912 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22600312409 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733640925296 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792908317932 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127005668806 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500365628494 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.