Some people think the cheap air flight gives ordinary people more freedom. However, others think the cheap air flight should be banned because it pollutes the air and brings many other problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
A section of society believes that low-cost carriers’ offers more leverage to common people. Whereas, others say that it ought to be banished since it is harmful to the environment and other numerous issue come along with that. In my opinion, which is why the prohibition of such airlines is vital for controlling the dire effects.
On the one hand, cheap aircrafts made the dream come true for many low-income group people. In other words, it is affordable one can travel by plane than travelling by other transportation. Further over, in the past, only the affluent can afford the high tickets of air, but now even this low budget aeroplane had made convenience for commoner as well. For instance, The Airport Authority, says that compares to the past 10 years there is an increase in travelling by aeroplanes 85% of the hike because of low-cost carriers.
On the other hand, in my view, along with the cheap rates, this also has drawbacks on our environment. Due to which they are high in demand and low price airlines also alleviates the air pollution which has a detrimental effect on the earth. Moreover, many planes travel to and fro realises carbon emission and due to conjunction aircraft does not get permission to land, which is why they travel in the sky after being reached at the destination and has a dire effect on the atmosphere. For example, The Times of India, reports says that 89% of pollution is generated by the low crafts. Therefore, to mitigate the problem authorities must ban them.
To conclude, cheap airlines are made for ordinary people to travel with it also has a consequence. They are the major contributor of harmful emission gas in the air, which is affecting the earth ozone layer, therefore, it is necessary to prohibit them
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 345, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...plane had made convenience for commoner as well. For instance, The Airport Authori...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, so, therefore, well, whereas, for example, for instance, in my opinion, in my view, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85808580858 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70208160054 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561056105611 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.943104622 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.142857143 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.85714285714 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167006164607 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575465645058 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328909460245 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104226992226 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0179817118176 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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