Some people prefer to relax by doing physical activities, while others choose mental activities (crosswords and chess etc )
Discuss both the views and given your opinion.
For sometime now, it has become the topic of discussion whereas, some believes that by doing exercise they feel relaxed and others prefer to do mental exercise to keep themselves stress-free. In my opinion, both form of activities are constructive way to be relaxed and it is persons own choice which one is better to keep them lighten.
On the one hand, there are people who prefer to do some sort of fitness activity to keep them calm and composed. In other words such activities help to ease the body muscles and mind to be diverted towards the relaxation mode. As a result it improves there health and mind which keep them away from any negative thoughts. For instance, According to The University of Chicago research, they say that 70% of people feel fresh and active by devoting their time towards workout.
On the other hand, some people consider to do mental activity like playing cross words or chess because it helps to improve their concentration and also enlighten the mood because of which they feels tension free. Furthermore, break is needed to have effective work life and persons thought process also increase ten times better than before. For example, if a person is doing same work than it becomes monotonous and effectiveness of that work decreases. That’s the reason such form of activities challenge their mind which help them to be mentally fit and encourage them to complete the work effectively.
To conclude, However, it should be persons own preference to feel relax because not all the people have same choices, some prefer to do exercise and some feel to divert their mind towards the challenging games like chess to feel relaxed which also help them to be efficient.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 179, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'mind being'.
Suggestion: mind being
...ities help to ease the body muscles and mind to be diverted towards the relaxation mode. A...
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Line 4, column 32, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'consider doing'.
Suggestion: consider doing
...orkout. On the other hand, some people consider to do mental activity like playing cross word...
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Line 4, column 195, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'feel'
Suggestion: feel
...nlighten the mood because of which they feels tension free. Furthermore, break is ne...
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Line 4, column 608, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... them to complete the work effectively. To conclude, However, it should be perso...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, whereas, for example, for instance, sort of, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86254295533 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50594409143 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518900343643 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.1998192146 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.636363636 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4545454545 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9090909091 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267961608062 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109157988455 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728917892354 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184906575949 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430026785585 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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