Some people say that art eg painting, music and poetry can be made by everyone whereas others believe that it can only be made by those with special ability.
Discuss both the view and give your opinion.
For sometime now, it has become a topic of debate where a section of society believes that anyone can become an artist in painting, music, and poetry, others say some are born star with inbuilt skills to be an artist. In my opinion with determination and dedication, a person can become a professional in the field of art.
We must acknowledge the fact that some of them are blessed to have the possession of incredible talent from birth and they do not make much effort to become a great singer or painter. Since they are gifted with a tremendous award just focus to enhance their skills to be mastered. For example, Singer Ms. Lata Mangeshkar is god gifted her singing is effortless and gifted with the best voice and not everyone has a natural voice like her.
However, on the other hand, with the help of courage and diligence, one can reach to achieve artistic skill like others, not everyone has an ability when they born there are a limited number of people with such skills. If a person is willing to become a musician with a hundred percent effort and focus can reach to destination decide with regular practices. For instance, Entertainer Madonna before becoming a singer was pursuing her career in dancing eventually realize that she can become a vocalist with self-confidence and enthusiasm. Now she is not only a singer but a complete package of entertainment which is only possible because of willpower.
In a nutshell, it can be summarized that it is a great deal to be born talented in the field of art. But a person can make their dream come true in the same with persistence and willingness to do it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 185, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rt to become a great singer or painter. Since they are gifted with a tremendous award...
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Line 3, column 440, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... everyone has a natural voice like her. However, on the other hand, with the hel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, thus, for example, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69337979094 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67967584382 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547038327526 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.4201688189 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.454545455 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0909090909 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90909090909 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244949425577 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0976265631802 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579015296587 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15781347987 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567992992308 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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