Some people believe limiting the speed is the best way for the road safety while other believe there are other ways to do this Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Some people believe, limiting the speed is the best way for the road safety, while other believe there are other ways to do this. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A section of society believes that the constructive way for the security of the road is to reduce the speed, whereas, others say there are different factors are also important. In my opinion, I feel it is necessary to explore the other options rather than be reliable on the speed.
On the one hand, the speed of the car is vital in term of security on the road. Since it is been observed that numerous time the cause of the accidents are limit of the vehicle. However, if there is no restriction on the speed drivers will have no control, which eventually results in detrimental effects on the road. For example, according to road safety rule, it is mandatory to drive under the limit because in the past 45% of accidents are due to the over speed and many of them have lost their life. As a result, the rule on speed limit becomes a priority for the safety reasons of car owners as well as pedestrians.
On the other hand, I opine, that other factors are immensely important for security such as drunken and drive and biker should compulsorily wear safety gears. Firstly, if a person is intoxicated they are not in a state of driving. Secondly, bikers create chaos on the roads they harsh while riding the safety it is necessary to wear protective wear. For instance, on average in India, 75% of accidents in 1998 took place due to biker and driving while drunk. Therefore, the law should pay more restrict towards them it will make the road safer.
To conclude, it often believes that speed limit is the only solution for making the road safe, but driving when consumed alcohol is offence additional there should be a law for bikers as well.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 80, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... vital in term of security on the road. Since it is been observed that numerous time ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, i feel, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57432432432 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44903306749 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52027027027 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5851266074 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.153846154 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.0769230769 7.06120827912 214% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289077084544 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936830764278 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664639436319 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178362239104 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579281557605 0.056905535591 102% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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