Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime.others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime,and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
A section of society feel that criminals ought to give the same type of penalties for their offence whereas, others advocate that it is essential to consider the situation of each misdeed and the motive behind committing should also be judged while punishing them. I will discuss both the sides of the essay with my own opinion.
On the one hand, offering the set penalty to offender despite a small crime like pickpocket or murder will create the threat among everyone who even thinks to commit a violation. This will impede their intention before taking any harsh step into the criminal world. For example, according to The New York Police Department, on average 70% of crime has alleviated in the year 1998 since they give same punishment for any crime made due to which small criminals have a fear among them. Additionally, they will think twice is it worth taking a risk since the consequence is of long term.
On the other hand, in my opinion, the purpose of the crime is vital before making any decision on offering any correction service such as, if the crime has taken place while self-defending. In this phenomenon, the intentions are not purposefully unlike in other cases, in such a scenario a mediocre will be penalized for no reason. Moreover, the notion for giving the same punishment will also create chaos and criminal would not mind enacting tremendously offensive misconduct. For instance, it will unfair if the intensity for the crime is not judged, such kind of act can generate more criminal and proliferating the crime. Thus, it is necessary to understand the fundaments of the offence.
In conclusion, in my view towards a fixed punishment is that it is an injustice for others. However, it is important to know the motive behind such steps before penalty since crime can take place accidentally.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, thus, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94838709677 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70024471855 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567741935484 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2235032557 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8461538462 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2307692308 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282244310393 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091052509999 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744453674733 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176345716547 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336897599985 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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