In some countries, buying a house rather renting one has become very important for people.
Why this might be the case?
Is this a positive or a negative development?
Staying in their own house has its comfort as well as benefits, in some parts of the world, it is proliferating the demand of owned home than living on the lease. The reason would be that it is financially beneficial simultaneously there is no hassle of shifting when a contract is over. It is obvious that the merits are more than the demerits of owning a house.
To begin with, people these days in some nation buying their own home because it is economically sensible option to have owned house rather than staying in a rented place. Although, purchasing a home is a huge investment but it has long term profit. For example, In Mumbai majority of people on an average spend 2- 5 lakh rupees on rent each year or more, but if they buy an apartment on bank loan a person save a lot of money at the same time the satisfaction of self-owned house will always be there. Therefore, looking at the future perspective, a saving of an individual will be profoundly good, which they can invest for other things.
Secondly, it is tremendously painful when a person needs to shift from one home to another when the lease gets over. Moreover, adjusting in the new house also becomes challenging at times like to be familiar with the locality, neighbour, and landlord. Thus, it can be avoided when they leave in the house which is owned by themselves. For instance, as per the Housing.com survey, people are attracted to buying the home has increased by 70% since it is a hassle-free option.
To conclude, over a period of time living in owned place has been in demand in some countries since it is a great saving of finance which is essential. The stress of shifting can also be avoided with this, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of purchasing their own house.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62420382166 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70846719669 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547770700637 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9925700638 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.692307692 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1538461538 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.84615384615 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189104813719 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617256785684 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410886447088 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109048277476 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394272312406 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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