"Farming is the backbone of a country, yet youngsters refuse to enter this profession. Why is this the case? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?"
It is not uncommon that these days the younger generation avoid taking an interest in the field of agriculture, although, it is the main source for living in the world. While the reason would be the parents' pressures and it is not at all a positive development since it has many consequences to it.
To begin with, many parents do not want their kid to live the same life they are living in, many factors are involved in farming like climate condition, dedication and the end result is also important to see if the crop is cultivated or not. Additionally, the majority of them consider medical, engineering is the field a child should make their career into since this option is booming and everyone wants doctors and engineers. For example, a recent article of The Times of India says, many parents do not prefer an agricultural field as a profession because it has no reputation as well as the income is also less compared to another professional background.
This is extremely a negative advancement due to such mentality people have forgotten that food is the main source of living and without which any professionals will not be inexistent. Moreover, not only there will be a scarcity of the food in the world due to less supply and more demand but also the effect will be detrimental to a living organism. For instance, the research conducted by the Agriculture association of India, says that due to negligence and fewer people doing farming will lead to a lack of food supplies by 2050.
To conclude, the youth nowadays are proliferating their interest in being doctors or engineers due to parents decision, because farming does not hold renowned image the way other fields do. This will have a negative impact on the society, furthermore, insufficiency will occur one day.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83986928105 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80893901826 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571895424837 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.6827973473 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.1 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119544159069 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489422586149 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0297317765341 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0726161855061 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232758878159 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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