Some people prefer to relax by doing physical activities, while others choose mental activities (crosswords and chess etc )
Discuss both the views and given your opinion.
For sometime, it had become the topic of discussion whereas, some believe that by doing exercise they feel relaxed, and other prefers to do mental exercise to keep themselves stress free. In my opinion, both form of activities are constructive way to be relax and it is persons own choice which one is better to keep them lighten.
On the one hand, there are people who prefer to do some sort of fitness activity to keep them out calm and composed. In other words such activities help to ease the body muscles additional mind is diverted towards the relaxation mode. As a result it improves there health and mind which keep them away from any negative thoughts. For instance, According to The University of Chicago research, they say 70% of people feel fresh and active by just devoting their time towards workout.
On the other hand, some consider to do mental activity like playing cross words or chess because it helps to improve the concentration and also enlighten the mood because of which a person feel tension free. Furthermore, break is need to have effective work life and persons thought process increases ten times better than before. For example, if a person is doing same work it becomes monotonous and effectiveness of that work decreases, that’s the reason such form of activity challenge their mind which helps them to be mentally fit and make person active to complete the work effectively .
To conclude, However, it should be persons own preference to feel relax because not all the people have same choices, some prefer to do exercise and some feel to divert their mind towards the challenging games like chess to feel relaxed which also help them to be efficient.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, whereas, for example, for instance, sort of, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85467128028 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52065191726 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532871972318 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.1336012559 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.3 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.9 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.2 7.06120827912 201% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271617334464 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114369543897 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651038033644 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181245629622 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343832578113 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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