In this fast paced Lifestyle, every person want to be fit physically as well as mentally which means most people want peaceful mind in order to live their life productive and with more ease. For this reason people adapt difference formula to be relax. Some people believe Physical activity is most prominent method to relax, whereas other group of people prefer mental activities such as crossword puzzle or chess in order to feel relax. In my opinion, both physical and mental activities are equally important to keep our mind free and productive.
It is undeniable fact that to become fit and energetic physically activities must needed. As every person has different interest to live a relaxed Lifestyle. Some people think that a physical activities such as an outdoor sports, yoga, gym keeps them fit physically and physical fitness leads to become more concentrated in work. To be specified, if any person has a healthy body through exercise then it's easy for them to do their work with a peaceful mind. Moreover, physical activities keep body and mind set Healthy and through healthy body and mindset anyone can achieve whatever they want in their interest field and it leads to freedom and through freedom anyone can live a relax and more productive lifestyle.
Others, however, believe that healthy mindset is vital for relaxation. Some games such as crossword puzzles and chess can helpful to inhance the concentration power of a mind and it can also helpful to create logical thinking. That's why some people think that through concentrations in any work any people can complete their work in appropriate time period with a relax mind. Furthermore, meditation is another mental peacefulness so through meditation anyone can sharp their mind and also remove some unnecessary thought which is reluctantly occurs in mind. That's why mentally healthy is also needed to relax and meditation and other mental activities are a crucial.
In conclusion, without any doubt, to become more relaxed every person need more focus mindset and both mental activities and physical activities and needed to get more relaxed life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, whereas, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14121037464 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62632962929 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458213256484 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5268129761 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.933333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1333333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310084938945 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11999694576 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103762402111 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212506224598 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0806803441779 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.