Advertising is all around us; it is an unavoidable part of everyone's life. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives while others say it is a negative one. Discuss both views and include your own opinion.
It is an undeniable fact that nowadays wherever we see Ads are published which has become part of life. A section on society is in favour of such practice whereas, others say it has a negative impact. In my opinion, I believe that it is not a good part of life since drawbacks are more than benefits.
On the one hand, the predominant reason for a marketing strategy is to spread awareness amid consumer about the products which eventually help them to buy. Moreover, not only they can keep up with the trend but also with ongoing fashion in the market due to publicity. For example, according to The Boston Consultancy Group, they say 75%, of people, find advertising useful since it helps them to know the advancements so that it plays an essential role while buying any material. Hence, if there are no such tool people will be clueless.
On the other hand, such practice bullies them into unnecessary buying which are not even useful to them. In other words, since the advertising appears in front of people again and again which ultimately lures and they waste money no unwanted kinds of stuff. For instance, The Amazon, say that repeat promotion and offers are vital to attract numerous number of customers such active helps to proliferate their sales. Hence, the strategic of flash sales push people to buy without a need.
To conclude, Ads are made to make them aware about the lunches and trends, but eventually it has a negative impact because buying wisely is important and making use of it rather than just purchasing due to a promotion.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1284.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73800738007 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50900259487 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60147601476 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.09252885 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5833333333 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165733916933 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582556031086 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433420391685 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0983210184239 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664506523572 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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