Advertising is all around us; it is an unavoidable part of everyone's life. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives while others say it is a negative one.
Discuss both views and include your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Nowdays, in commercialization era, marketing plays a vital role in competitive markets. As the inevitable result, consumers now are surrounded by a massive number of products and service advertisements. Although people are splited as to whether commercial is a negative part of our lives, I consider it as a positive one.
There are several advantages of advertising. In the first place, it is an integral part in the economy as a competitive tool among companies. Thus, consumers apparently obtain many benefits from it such as being informed about the choices they have and having comparisons between products. Without advertisements and marketing campaigns, there is no bridge between customers and companies. Secondly, because of the enormous demand for graphic designer, It helps society to create a thousands of job oppoturnities for people. For instance, one of the biggest advertising agencies, WPP plc founded in 1971, has 130,000 employees across the world and earned 15 billion dollars revenue in 2017.
On the other hand, because of the grant profit from advertisements, some television channels has ruined their programs by inserting excessively commercials into.Thesedays, it is really hard to find a television program not including any commercials. Moreover, several advertisements on Internet consist of offensive and obscence contents that annoy viewer and adversely affect children. Even, these advertisements sometimes constitute virus links that if users click on, their computers would be damaged by anonymous hacker.
In conclusion, despite of a few minor unpleasant effects, the advertising industry brought our lives several merits. Therefore, i strongly believe that this industry is going to be bigger in the future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...rtisements. Although people are splited as to whether commercial is a negative part of our li...
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Suggestion: a thousand
...ic designer, It helps society to create a thousands of job oppoturnities for people. For i...
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Suggestion: a thousand; thousands
...ic designer, It helps society to create a thousands of job oppoturnities for people. For i...
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Suggestion:
...t helps society to create a thousands of job oppoturnities for people. For instan...
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Suggestion: Thesedays
... inserting excessively commercials into.Thesedays, it is really hard to find a television...
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Suggestion:
...al merits. Therefore, i strongly believe that this industry is going to be bigger...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, first, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64772727273 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2471622668 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.685606060606 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5815595546 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.5 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5714285714 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167920752724 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476003645106 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510622406991 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.087198706126 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0165252503579 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.49 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.45 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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