Advertising is all around us; it is an unavoidable part of everyone's life. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives while others say it is a negative one. Discuss both views and include your own opinion.
It is often seen that ads are published in every corner and eventually become are part of life. A section on society is in favour of such promotions whereas, others say it has a negative impact. In my opinion, I believe it has a positive effect and creates awareness.
On the one hand, the predominant reason for a marketing strategy is to spread awareness amid consumer about the products which is helpful for buyer. In other words, if people are unknown about new phones or car which has better feature than earlier they will be outdated than others. Moreover, they save on time doing research but ads cover all the criteria which one should be knowing. For example, The Boston Consultancy Group, according to the 75%, of people, find advertising useful since it helps them to know the advancements so that it plays an essential role while buying any material. Hence, if there are no such tool people will be clueless.
On the other hand, the drawback of advertising is that repetition lures them to buy the products which they are not even in need. Due to which they unnecessary waste the money which can be utilized for productivity things. Furthermore, it impacts the decision making skill of a person since they have experienced bitter in past they overanalyse. For instance, research says on average 89% of human temps towards the promotion feature since it is been shown continuous and people get bullied because of which and land up buying. Hence, such practice plays with human minds which harmful.
To conclude, although such exhibitions had a negative impact but can be controlled by prioritizing the needs. However, Ads are made to make individual aware of the lunches and new trends which keep them going with the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85858585859 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59472560818 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1777163225 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53333333333 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129535917317 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434338169161 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363924013608 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0833491724561 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589713984128 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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