Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion
In many countries, noise is considered as an important environmental factor that have to been controlled while the others allow their people make noise freely. Although, in some cases amusing noise makes people happy and dynamic, I passionately believe that it should be restricted to some extent.
On the one hand, some people like to as much noise as possible as they want for various. Firstly, many of them are more comfortable and free when creating a noise from different activities while working or entertaining. For instance, people tend to play music loudly and make noise in festival for sake of relaxing after hardworking days, although it may disturb their next-door neighbors. Secondly, high-pitched noise that inevitably is generated by vehicles, population bomber and industrialization activities , can not be controlled easily. Therefore, in some developed countries, noise usually is restricted partly in sometimes of a day.
On the other hand, Noise at high level is considered as an aspect of pollution and should be restricted by law for some reasons. In the first place, It causes adverse effects on human healthy. The urban citizens who expose to the sound of transportations and intrusive machines all day long, may have been stress out at night and even suffered from insomnia or headache. In addition, many concerts, festivals and private parties make noise so loud that distract people in nearly area from working or driving. As the result, their productivity is lower and there are more accidents.
In short, because the effects of noise on humanity society is bigger. Nowadays, people and government should be aware of the issues to find the resort for it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, in short, in some cases, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19047619048 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8859106835 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593406593407 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5560125896 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.214285714 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253153611221 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877041914798 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.08041708956 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160656284946 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655360668734 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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