An increasing number of people are buying what they need online what are the advantages and disadvantages for buyer and online companies

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An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. what are the advantages and disadvantages for buyer and online companies?

E-commerce is trending these days and a lot and a lot of people are making use of it for their needs. The benefits to the buyer are available products from across the globe and convenient. However, the drawbacks are also associated which quality and hassle in exchange especially electronics. Online companies also earn great profits as well as losses. In this essay, I will further explain the points in detail with examples.

Firstly, shopping online is convenient, it saves time, which people spend visiting malls. Secondly, a person can buy any goods which do not originate from the region by providing wide arrange from the world. Additionally, this is delivered at the doorstep which reduce the pain of lifting the products till home. Amazon, for example, this is one site from where an individual can but anything like food, electronics, books, clothes etc. Hence, many things to offer under one umbrella with just one click.

However, with the benefits, it also has some drawback like exchanging electronic product since it acts as a middle man the end user faces issue if the item is faulty. Unlike it is explained in the shop about the details the same is not done online which leads to confusion while buying.

Secondly, organisations earn a tremendous amount of profit ration which benefits the company to grow in future. For instance, Alibaba earns 89% of profit every year because of the proliferating customer and gives financial stability to them. But along with the profit it also faces the loss like if the customer cancels the order or demand or replacement it involves an additional cost of delivering the good twice.

In conclusion, the e-commerce site has advantages as well as disadvantages to both end-user and firm. For the buyer, it is flexible and spread of material available from anywhere. Moreover, it acts as a third party that the reason earn profits, but also suffer from waste when customer demand for exchange.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00613496933 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64192180759 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598159509202 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.8326608656 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6666666667 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38888888889 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14352361651 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440898031777 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398258928067 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0761875301741 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272527348156 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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