Illiteracy continues to be a concern for many countries in the world today What are the causes of illiteracy in the modern world and what effects does it have on the people concerned and on society as a whole

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Illiteracy continues to be a concern for many countries in the world today. What are the causes of illiteracy in the modern world, and what effects does it have on the people concerned and on society as a whole?

Education is a stressful topic by most of the nations and it has become the global forum of discussion in today's’ era as well. The reason would be that most of the people cannot afford the expense, which is incurred during the paradigms of the studies. The ramification of such can have a negative impact on an individual and the community.
To being with, the main problem is people are uneducated due to the financial status of the family, many of them are not in a position to bear the burden of school fees. In other words, as soon as the children grow-up their parents want them to earn money so that they can take care of other family members. For example, as per the survey conducted by the University of Mumbai, on an average 25 out of 75 children is going to school in some parts of the states. Another reason is people are aware of the importance of education and how they can improve their life if they are literate.
The outcome of such condition is dire like if the person is illiterate they cannot grow in their life and labours job is the only option such us working in a factory or on the construction sites which has a harmful atmosphere. Moreover, the earning is less and the cycle goes on in the family. Secondly, the community needs to be reliable on outsourcing the professional from other countries which is why economically the nation gets affected negatively. For instance, the literacy rate in Somalia is meagre that is why the country and its people are far behind from others.
In Conclusion, although it is a contemporary era people the world is still distress about the illiteracy rate because they do not have enough earning to bear the cost of education. Due to which people need to work in the worst condition and the countries are not financially strong.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59190031153 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60410051012 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529595015576 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3420288278 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.384615385 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6923076923 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132141620041 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434365762428 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386988797111 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0823250375665 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418301810711 0.056905535591 74% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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