Some People think parents should read or tell stories to children, while others think parents need not do that as children can read book, watch TV or movies by themselves. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
A section of society believes that if a parent participates in reading storybooks for their children can be an enjoyable experience. However, other opine they should do this active by own since it will be beneficial in studies and decision-making ability. In this essay will demonstrate both the point of view along with my perspective.
Storytelling or reading has always been a part of childhood but it becomes more entertaining if the parents narrate to a child. This goes without saying that, due to hectic schedule and only time for bonding with a toddler is during bed-time stories, additional, a child enjoys being in the company with their parents at that moment of time. For example, a recent survey conducted by the Poddar International School, results indicate that 10 out of 10 students preferred to listen to a story, the reason behind this is they get more attention from their parents. Therefore, it is essential family time and one should make it a ritual of reading storybooks for children.
On the other hand, some believe that a child reading books or watching movies on their own have advantages. Firstly, they develop a habit of reading from the beginning and ramification has a great positive impact on studies, as well many scientists approve this theory. Secondly, a child do not dependent on anyone who brings confidence in them to make their own choices in life. The Time of India, articles say that a young one, who from starts take initiative are not reluctant on anybody. As a result, they excel in education and learn making decisions for the future without being reliable on parents.
To conclude, people have different opinions on storytelling by a parent since it can be a time to bond with a little one or a child should read or see TV by themselves. I support the latter view since it is an important aspect that a child should learn about being independent.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 540, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to make'.
Suggestion: to make
...sult, they excel in education and learn making decisions for the future without being ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85538461538 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79465931914 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566153846154 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0168969414 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.714285714 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2142857143 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20294290884 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765651959996 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701753787387 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133662142114 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361364356999 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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