Illiteracy continues to be a concern for many countries in the world today What are the causes of illiteracy in the modern world and what effects does it have on the people concerned and on society as a whole

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Illiteracy continues to be a concern for many countries in the world today. What are the causes of illiteracy in the modern world, and what effects does it have on the people concerned and on society as a whole?

Education is an integral part of people's life. Illiteracy is always a significant issue for many nations; there are a lot of causes for it. Not only does it effect on males and females lives but also it has a detrimental impact on society. This essay will first look at the economic problem which is one of the causes of Illiteracy, and then discuss its impact on culture and society before reaching a conclusion.

To begin with, there are many causes for illiteracy but if I choose one then it is economic problems. As an illustration, developing countries have some financial conflicts which have a quite impact on the education processes. In addition to that, people in these countries have law income which leads them to push their children to work and leave schools in order to support their families. This can be witnessed in Egypt where fathers and mothers work more than 12 hours to get at least their need for food and housing; they cannot find enough money to send their children to schools. Furthermore, the high prices of foods and essential items play an important role when it comes to children's work at an earlier age and leave the education.

When it comes to the effects of the above- mentioned issue on the community, It can say that it has a huge impact on cultural identity. In other words, there is a gap between learners and uneducated which makes a cultural conflict among them. Moreover, it may lead to racialism among community members. Besides that, illiteracy effects on countries’ developments. Finland is a prime example for the most developed country because it tackled the education issue, and it has zero percent of illiteracy. Hence, it is important to kill the illiteracy to raise community standards.

It can be concluded that illiteracy is concerned by most countries in the whole world; it has its negative effect on people and community standards, and the mean reason of that is economic issues. It is recommended that authorities should lunch awareness campaigns to Minimize illiteracy in order to tackle this problem.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ave some financial conflicts which have a quite impact on the education processes. In addition...
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Suggestion:
...teracy in order to tackle this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, look, may, moreover, so, then, at least, in addition, in other words, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1721.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91714285714 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73585564722 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551428571429 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7844510832 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.235294118 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5882352941 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88235294118 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26446316335 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807227693534 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810111344691 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163780299763 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064189488268 0.056905535591 113% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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