Traffic and housing problems in major cities could be solved by moving large companies and factories and their employees to the countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Nowadays, big cities suffer from Traffic and housing issues. Some people believe that putting industrial factories and business companies outside big cities will be tackle these problems; I am of the belief of that. In this essay, my point of view will be demonstrated before reaching a conclusion.
To begin with, transportation crowding effects on people life. Not only does it affect member’s time but also it put more load in their life. In other words, travelling every day from home to work cause traffic problem in cities; most of the employments move at the same time to go to their work. Therefore, moving Factories and company outside on the countryside it will help to reduce the traffic issue; the traffic flow will be on outside roads not inside towns' roads. This can be witnessed in Jeddah where governments remove all companies from center city to Industrial areas, the traffic problem solved by 75%.Hence, and putting factories outside towns will solve the traffic issue.
In addition to that, in the modern era, finding house at big towns has become a big problem. As an illustration, in big cities it is a difficult to find convenient home due to the population. Moreover, It is quite pricey. Therefore, if governments transfer companies to areas outside the towns, it may solve this issue; help working people to save money and time. In 2017, an article by the Economist recommended that housing should be available in industrial areas for all staffs to reduce time and money in addition to traffic issues.
In conclusion, I would like to restate my opinion that I agree with transfer industrial areas outside the cities In order to solve these issues. It is recommended that businessmen and governments should work together to tackle these issues to raise community standards.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, as for, in addition, in conclusion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01333333333 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70428466615 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526666666667 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0152865521 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.266666667 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267084820859 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831398486496 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604453380315 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15734991197 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582064306563 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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