In this modern world, mortality rate due to road side accidents have increased 10 folds than the past. It is argued that limitation of over speeds can play integral role to control road side fatal accidents, while others believe that others immunity measures are essential for improvement of road safeness .This essay will discuss both views, my opinion and followed by reasoned conclusion
On the one hand, over speed is one of the major factor for the road side fatalities and by doing decisive measures we can improve the road safety effectively. The road accidents due high speed vehicles are mortal because there are high chances of intraabdominal injury due to massive collusion to another vehicles and stab wound due to sharp object. Consequently, mortality of passenger happens due to these massive injuries . For instance, in SaudiArabia road traffic accident is the major cause of death due to high speed vehicles collision in the high way. Therefore, by monitoring vehicle speed through surveillance camera and traffic warden and limit the vehicles speed in cities and motorways can effectively control the traffic accident and enhance road side security.
On the other hand, there are several ways to control the road side deadly accidents which are as follows. Firstly, compliance of seat belt during driving , which help to prevent counter collision head injury. Secondly, medical, physical and mental test before issue driving license will help to prevent accident due to human errors.
Thirdly, child safety seats should be mandatary, while driving car will reduce infant death rate. According to survey, in London 50% child mortality has improved after implentatation of child safeness rules. Thus, we should do other decisive measures to improve our road side safety.
I personally believe that in addition to control speed limits, other safety precautions are also mandatory and I strictly follow additional safety precautions such as use of seat belts, follow speed limit rules to prevent my self from catastrophe in the highways.
In conclusion, although motor speed control is mandatory to improve road security, other addition rules will also help to reduce fatality rate due to road side disasters . I strongly believe that both measure will improve road safeness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, thus, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1934.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32782369146 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60770271889 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523415977961 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 610.2 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 96.5363259205 49.4020404114 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.933333333 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0666666667 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255682559776 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846440047871 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775710979736 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136283108137 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648956029366 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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