Social class differences have prevailed for long in communities, and many people today are living below the poverty line. The number of homeless individuals has raised recently, however, although I admit that giving money to them is a good idea, I still believe that it is not the best way.
Firstly, I acknowledge that donating money to homeless people will help to lower the poverty level as mostly homeless individuals contribute to poverty. In addition, with the help of monetary funds, they can fulfill their basic needs such as,food and shelter because these are the facilities that they lack the most. Also, this would lead to decreased street crime like pocket picking and snatching as many poor and needy people are involved in small crimes. As a result, better society would form.
However, despite the obvious benefits of funding homeless people with the money, I still believe that imparting education to them is a better alternative, with the help of which it is easier for them to find a proper job. In contrast ,helping them with money would maKe them dependent and carefree, where as education will help them to become a better individual and also enables them to earn for themselves. This would give advantage for longer time.
Finally, the best way would probably be providing fixed job positions for homeless people in various departments. Take, for instance, those who cannot study or are elderly, they should be taught technical works like car repair, washing machine repair and other electrical appliances repair, and also regarding special position for homeless in the above fields. Moreover, being able to work for themselves would make them more productive.
To sum up, despite the fact that giving money to homeless provides food and shelter to them and also contributes to decrease crime rate, I still believe that imparting education to them and providing fixed job positions for them would be more beneficial in long-term.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, still, for instance, in addition, in contrast, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1246105919 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52741492539 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545171339564 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.9820317913 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.538461538 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6923076923 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6923076923 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289077612165 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109477790757 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761163221547 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172424278967 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055999592571 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.