Some people say that government should not put money on building theatres and sports stadiums.others argue that they should spend more in medical care and education.Discuss both views and give your opinion.
A section of society believes that the nation investing in an infrastructure of the theatres and sports stadiums is not essential. Whereas, others advocated that there should be more financial support to medical care and education. In my opinion building more school and hospitals are wiser choices for citizens.
On the one hand, people believe there is already a plethora of theatres and playground for sporting events putting money to build more will be wasted. Moreover, it aquaria huge pace which can be utilized for hospitals and school and many more other things. For instance, The Olympic Games 2004 was hosted by the UK, research says that the government was in billion-pound loss. Because for an event which happens once in a decade in the particular country for that they had built new infrastructure. Therefore, making a wise decision on funding is increase otherwise possible to face loss.
On the other hand, in my view, authorities should focus devoting more for facilities like schooling and medical it will help the nation to grow. In other words, many people travel to other countries for better medical treatment or education since it is not available in their zone. Furthermore, quality studies and treatments are necessary and the government will be in profit since they do not have to be reliable on other states for support. For example, the situation like COVID- 19 is threatening for a country like India or Pakistan since do not have enough hospital or medical staff to take care of such pandemic. Hence, a regime should spend more on making medical cares and offering education for a child this will help them in future.
In conclusion, taking the significant steps is vital the government should provide financial aids, to medical and institution since it is essential when the need arises and can make a profit out. However, theatres and stadiums are not that important.
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furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in my view, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04113924051 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69727759811 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541139240506 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8401388886 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.2 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2666666667 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286820672188 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100732445804 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062933325002 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177284571472 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507152383853 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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