Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example, working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children).
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Voluntary work like keeping clean the society area or charity work is one of the superior causes and some of them feel that it should be made mandatory in schools for second cycle students. I completely agree with the above idea since it helps adolescents to be a responsible adult in the future.
To being with, if such kind of activity is made a part of schooling teaches children the scenes of belongingness towards society. In other words, they learn to be helping the elders in need those who stay alone without any intention of being paid. Moreover, it creates interest among the students to voluntarily participate in teaching someone who is not in a position to pay fees. For example, The University of Boston, says that on average 75% of adults who anticipate in the welfare work without getting paid are the one being part of it since school time. Hence, they understand the cause and do not value their money.
Secondly, taking part in charity work make them caring and disciplined. Because teenagers are more vulnerable than toddlers it becomes difficult to handle them when they are growing. Therefore, if they involved in community services which profoundly makes them sensitive and calm looking at the needed and which turns them to be the responsible adults for the future for community by going good causes. For instance, according to the research 82% of adolescents learn to differentia the behavioural aspect when they do any voluntary job which helps them to take responsibility.
To conclude, it is an excellent thought to make charity programme part to school curriculum because students can also learn to give care to needy and scenes of responsibility alleviates towards the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, kind of, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98251748252 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7522458032 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58041958042 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3600012381 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.75 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240733658278 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833118781963 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546999670667 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139835254309 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392988560833 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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