Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time and have health problems as a result.
Why do many working people not get enough exercise?
What can be done about this problem?
It is often observed that a number of working individuals get lesser or no time for a workout, whether they are working or not due to which they suffer from health-related issues. The main reason is due to the hectic schedule they have no time and feel lethargic.
The predominant reason is due to time constraining people to avoid doing exercise instead they will relax. In other words, many people spend hours travelling to work and by the end, there is no energy left to do any fitness training. The other problem is feeling lazy since the entire day at the office make them exhausted and physically draining. For instance, In India, on average 89% of people, travel 2 hrs a day one way to work, as a result, they are left with little time which is utilized for sleeping so that next day they will fresh to work again.
Nevertheless, the sedentary lifestyle brings obesity problem which is causing a detrimental effect on the human body. To mitigate the consequence which is why the companies should make exercise at least for 30 minutes compulsory. This will help them to be fit as well as there no excuses for no workout. Secondly, the government should encourage people to use the bicycle more rather than a vehicle this will help them at a great extent to be active. For example, The Hotel J W Marriott has a competition every month and award with a cash prize to their employees who loses the maximum weight which motivates others to do the workout.
To conclude, working people do not get time for a workout which results in a harmful effect on the body to alleviate the problem if companies will make exercise as part of work than they do not have an option left additional governments ought to make cycle has a primary mode of transportation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, at least, for example, for instance, as a result, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64536741214 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62055627131 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552715654952 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.7020379328 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.166666667 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0833333333 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332069088465 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114569421648 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719675410555 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210361929679 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656907763151 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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