in some countries citizens are allowed to keep gun at thieir homes. do the advantages of this outweigh disadvantage. discuss and give your opinion?
In this modern era safety is the first need of hour to live in the pieceful atmosphere.Presently it is debatable weather for the safety of family ,people should be allowed to keep weapon at their home or not. Here ,i would like to establish disadvatages weighter than the advantages with my own perception.
There are multifarious points for the demerits. First and foremost, having gun at home has a bad effect over children .for instance ,children are impulsive , with their lack of knowledge and their lack of information ,they may misuse the gun. As a result, it may responsible for serious da...
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Sentence: Here ,i would like to establish disadvatages weighter than the advantages with my own perception.
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Suggestion: Refer to disadvatages and weighter
it may responsible
it may be responsible
therefore it responsible to commit suicide
therefore it is responsible to commit suicide
There are point put down for its merits.
There are point to put down for its merits.
living family away from cities or lonely places safier with the protection.
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security equipment worthful to secure family members.
security equipment is worthful to secure family members.
it cause a
it causes a
security and safety is prime duty of country
security and safety are the prime duty of country
Sentence: In this modern era safety is the first need of hour to live in the pieceful atmosphere.Presently it is debatable weather for the safety of family ,people should be allowed to keep weapon at their home or not.
Error: pieceful Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Here ,i would like to establish disadvatages weighter than the advantages with my own perception.
Error: disadvatages Suggestion: disadvantages
Error: weighter Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Furthermore, living with short temper and in case of anger , people may use these dangerous instruments in the wrong way and may cause dangerous conflict and can take someone's life and therefore it responsible to commit suicide .on the contrary it has prons also.
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Sentence: Firstly, living family away from cities or lonely places safier with the protection.
Error: safier Suggestion: safer
Sentence: For example, sometimes people caught by thiefts , robbers and many more dangerous people so having gun is helpful to come out from this serious situation.
Error: thiefts Suggestion: thefts
Sentence: Therefore, security equipment worthful to secure family members.
Error: worthful Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Moreover, crime, murder, kidnapping, robbery and so on is gainning ground day by day and therefore travell alone at night is not a piece of cake .
Error: gainning Suggestion: gaining
Error: travell Suggestion: travel
Sentence: From my notion, although it has some merits yet the presence of gun in the home is unscure , it cause a great disasterous consequencies among families also mishappening.
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Error: unscure Suggestion: unsure
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 8 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 12 2
Always put a space after punctuation marks. Essay e-rater is sensitive.
Always capitalize the first letter of a sentence.
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 8 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 12 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 303 350
No. of Characters: 1464 1500
No. of Different Words: 178 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.172 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.832 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.581 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 110 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 70 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 52 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 34 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.643 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.604 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.786 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.304 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.572 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.048 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5