Some countries encourage children to do paid work. What are the advantages and disadvantages?
Children are motivated to work for pay by countries. Eventhough it has some benefits like improvement in financial status and exposure to the outside world, it has some drawbacks like disturbances to the basic education and future career of the children.
Conversely, the consequences of doing paid joba from a young age can devastating for a child. Firstly, the basic education, which every child must have, is completely disturbed by the work as children are unable to do two things at once. Secondly, the future career of the child is lost as a consequence of improper basic education. When a child is deprived of basic education, it can never learn the basic skills and climb the ladder in their career, rather ends up being exploited in slave jobs. This was evident in Meghalaya’s jute industry where the children are made to work 20 hours a day in order to prevent them from going to schools and make these children to depend on these jute industries forever for money.
To conclude, children are made to do paid jobs in some countries. The advantages of this includes improvement of the child’s financial status and exposure to the outside world to learn many things, but paid jobs at a young age ruins a child’s education as well as its future career.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1063.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 218.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87614678899 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83440585974 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54128440367 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.9359247148 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.111111111 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2222222222 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209351818472 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103288769569 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827729293764 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155834456722 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241298143753 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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