In some countries, even though the rates of serious crimes are decreasing, people feel
less safe than ever before.
What do you think are the causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to
solve it?
Despite the fact that serious crime rates in some countries are decreasing, people become more concerned about their safety than ever before. The main cause for it is because the governments do not have strict laws for petty crimes which happen every day. Therefore, the most viable solution is to pass severe laws to deter small offences.
The worries of people about their safety stem from the lack of legal consequences for petty criminals. If a person commits a serious crime, the government will be able to apply one of the punishment methods such as capital punishment, life sentence or prison term, which can easily prevent citizens from doing serious things. However, when the law is lenient with petty criminals, the offenders are not afraid of conducting their repeated misbehavior. For example, although guns are prohibited and serious crimes are mostly prevented in Vietnam, the number of petty crimes such as theft or assaults have increased by 20% from 2018 to 2019 due to tolerant laws, bringing more anxiety to many people.
To tackle this problem, the government should pass strict laws for petty crimes that will act as a deterrent. If people are aware of the serious consequences of their actions, they will be less likely to disobey the laws. This could shed light on the situation and make people feel relieved as they are being protected. In Canada, after the government imposed a heavy fine for the public assaults, the number of people who commit this crime has decreased by 70%.
In conclusion, due to the tolerance of the law towards petty crimes, people have been worried a lot about their daily safety; however, it can be addressed through stricter laws passed by the government in the future.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96896551724 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47154796555 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58275862069 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4231580506 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.083333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196423894766 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782832871497 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601150683136 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122573306919 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659236221529 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.