In some countries, a high proportion of criminal acts are committed by teenagers. Why has this happened? what can be done to deal with this?
One disquieting problem faced by many countries is juvenile delinquency. Juvenile delinquency, also simply called delinquency, is referring to antisocial and unlawful behavior in which person under the age of 18 commits it. This abusive behavior which is known as the child and adolescent version of crime occurs more and more in the world. This essay will depict about this phenomenon encompassing both of the potential reasons which affect the number of this offense and the effective solutions which should be implemented to tackle this problem.
Two possibly quintessential reasons for a high number of delinquencies are environment and economic perspective. Firstly, there is no doubt that neighborhood significantly impact on a person’s development including their behavior, for instance, friendship. Friends have an important influence to form the child’s character either to be good or bad as a child will copy peers. Bad friendship, especially and ultimately, is the one potential factor contributing to the number of delinquency. Secondly, another factor is economic perception. Delinquency is an indicator of the general prosperity of country. In society with low level of prosperity, the number of juvenile violation is noted higher than other countries on it. In another word, citizens, mainly children and adolescents of that country do offenses because perhaps they do not have another choice to satisfy their life necessary except delinquency. Consequently, many countries create a number of greatly helpful decisions to conquer it.
One effective way to overcome this worrying delinquency is through comprehensive strategy. It is multidisciplinary way from government collaborating with families, schools, communities, and other related parties. It is four helpful principles that can be done : (1) strengthening and enhancing the family in its main responsibilities to form the children’s moral and character, and also controlling their activities in neighborhoods; (2) enhancing the supporting from core social institutions such as schools, religion communities, and social communities; (3) releasing and promoting delinquency prevention campaign; (4) establishing a system of comprehensively graduated sanctions depending on the level and frequency of violation. As a result, if those principles is implemented in a country, a number of juvenile offenses will be reduced significantly, moreover, not exist anymore.
To sum up, a tremendous threatening behavior, the juvenile delinquency is caused by two potential causes such as an environment and economic perspective. To tackle this issue, a comprehensive strategy from government is believed as the effective way to solve it collaborating with families, communities, and other related parties.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'campaign' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'campaigns'.
Suggestion: campaigns
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, no doubt, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2375.0 1615.20841683 147% => OK
No of words: 407.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.83538083538 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.52139527364 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 741.6 506.74238477 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 96.3738680228 49.4020404114 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4210526316 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26315789474 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130598593471 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.034580266559 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468299364087 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0814824721118 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449050643723 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.59 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 78.4519038076 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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