In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is, therefore, necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Eating fast food has been an essential part of our daily lives in the development of the society. In my point of view, having a meal of fresh junk food doesn't cause any health problems.
Firstly, the reason associated with my opinion is cleanness and freshness. It's important to remember that there are lots of well-known brands around the world such as McDonald, Jollibee, Lotteria,... Customers are extremely impressed by the service and process to make the best dishes of fast food.
A second area to consider is the nutrient that junk food provides for people. It follows that chicken, vegetable, egg, beef or even tomato..., which are all necessary food for people to digest, exist in fast food.
Last but not least, health problems happen to increasing number of people as a result of hot topic recently: dirty food. For this reason, not only fast food but also other kinds of food can do harm to the general public.
To solve this problem, government should impose strict regulations on checking the origin and freshness in food in every stalls and restaurants,
In summary, fast-food is not the factor that leads to the health problems of a significant number of people in many areas in the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, so, well, in summary, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1004.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 207.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85024154589 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5508161307 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642512077295 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 506.74238477 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2858473388 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.4 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361772123125 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129548207022 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875076513857 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179798686653 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0827333470739 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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