An Exploring perspective has been proposed that home-schooling is better than traditional educated method. Nevertheless, I don’t support this view. I think there is more deficiencies of home-schooling than public education.
Initially, the significant issue regarding home-schooling is that parents are not professional enough as a teacher. they don’t have systematic pedagogy train. Without this skill parents can’t work out a specialized and sustained process such as how many times on each learning day is appropriate to cost, which stage of course from different subject should be learned together and how to adjust teaching program according to children’s receptivity to improve efficient.
The second drawback of home-schooling is that parents hold scarce knowledge. There is a huge array of subject and knowledge point which should be known via targeted education. Schools even allocate each teacher for normally one subject. How can parents be adequate for every subject? It would lead terrible consequence to children who can’t get enough knowledge from their parents’ teach.
Nevertheless, home-learning is not without any merits.it is no doubt that home-learning can create more spent times between parents and children. It is beneficial to improve the family relationship. But also home-schooling will reduce the time children play with the same age peoples. Children may cant be offered ample times to associate with their friends and receive almost message from parents.it is harmful to the construction of children‘s communication ability.
So that is the all opinions which I want to state.in my mind, the cons of home-learning is far beyond traditional public education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, nevertheless, regarding, second, so, i think, no doubt, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.78515625 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3390349898 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640625 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 67.5499525814 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5625 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23926686163 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807586402742 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619681805488 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132605012738 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521235790395 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.01 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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