In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development.
In some developed and developing countries, it has become far more common for people to live alone. I am personally of the idea that this trend could have both merits and drawbacks in equal measure.
The increase in the number of single-person households can be seen as positive from many perspectives. On an individual level, people who choose to live alone may become much more independent of others and self-confident than those who live with family members. A young man, for example, who lives on his own will need to acquire skills like learning how to cook, clean or systematically manage his budget to pay the bills, all of which are valuable life skills. In addition, a person living alone can have complete freedom of action. They can do whatever they want without the fear of being disturbed. This is especially vital for scientists who require privacy and any interuption can disastrously result in breaking up their whole working process.
However, the issue can be considered from the opposite angle. Initially, people who live alone can experience feelings of loneliness, isolation rather than independence. Truly, they have carry the burden of paying all the bills and taking care of every house chores. Moreover, they lack emotional support and useful advices which can only be provided by family. Finally, living alone can easily lead to depression which is likely to end up in suicidal attempt. For instance, a young adult who is deeply depressed due to some certain reasons can commit suicide without anyone stopping if that one lives alone.
In summary, the rise in one-person households can have both beneficial and detrimental effects on individuals. It is important to take this matter into consideration so that sensible solutions can be proposed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use past participle here: 'carried'.
Suggestion: carried
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ne stopping if that one lives alone. In summary, the rise in one-person house...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, may, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12027491409 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79000556145 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649484536082 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3446756068 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.125 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1875 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6875 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187778893955 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611954143845 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624357729688 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113219831893 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587381501767 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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