Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to have a satisfying career life than those who frequently change jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There are widely differing views on the issue of whether engaging in one job or regularly altering occupation will bring more job satisfaction to employees. In spite of being loyal to one position will give the worker the promotion opportunities, I firmly believe that people who not stay the same career over a period will be more pleasant about their working life.
Firstly, people who change job can set their own goals and follow their own passions. Thus, they are confident enough to grasp the opportunities. For example, the research carried out British Columbia University has shown that 73% employees of those companies which are developing in such recent fields like Information Technology, Digital Marketing, and Human Resources Management are job-hoppers. The reason is simple, said by sociologist Mark Arvin, because job-hoppers have learned how to deal with the ups and downs and not fear the shacking and shocking career. So they dare to challenge themselves. Not only can they acquire more skills but also they have chances to put the knowledge gained into practice. Therefore, they will end up doing the exact job that is appropriate for them.
Secondly, working in various areas will help the worker to obtain fresh experiences and be equipped with a wide-ranging network. In other words, the occupation switch will give people chances to work in different working environments, meet new peoples and build up their social skills. For instance, Henry Miller decided to leave his everyday job despite a good salary and ventured to try other works. And after all, he became one of the most famous and well-paid authors of the twentieth century. Since then, he has thousands of fans around the world who love his books. So that we can say changing job gives people a lot of chances to be more satisfied.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that job changing will lead to a satisfying career than a fixed occupation because of the opportunities and wonderful experiences that staying at the same job can never bring to them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, after all, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in other words, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1707.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05029585799 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71579101094 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612426035503 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.7949294987 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.6875 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.125 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21414675692 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612367839143 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479874016646 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127380733133 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0168567389119 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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