In some countries, men and women are having children late in life. What are reasons? What are effects?
In the threshold of new era, we human have witnessed significant changes, from the family structures to the increasing trend towards delaying parenthood. In some developed nations, the average age of having a child is around 30 to 35, comparatively higher than that in the past. This essay will point out some of the factors influencing this change and how it affects the society as a whole.
To begin with, there are two main reasons driving the mentioned shift: the hustling bustling working environment and the advancements women’s empowerment. To illustrate, as society develops rapidly, graduators either tend to spend time pursuing different levels of higher education or work in demanding working environment. Consequently, it contributes to the rise of both getting marriage late and late giving birth. Aside from that, in civilization time, gender equality is being promoted, which allows either men or women to obtain the strong financial status before having a child. Like Britain, those living in Tokyo have been busy at work such that it deters them from even dating.
On the other hand, I strongly opine that delaying parenthood comes along with both pros and cons. On the positive side, it is widely believed that children who are nurtured in wealthy family, will probably access to betterment of living standards. On the downside, although middle-age parents have experience in taking care of children, they still find troubles in rising up their offspring due to the lack of energy. According to a research conducted by Havard University in late 2015, 80 percent children suffering from mental disease namely depression are from family with big generation gap. That is to say, this tendency does not only have detrimental impact parents but next generation as well.
In conclusion, I am convinced that in the modern life, it is comparatively difficult for either genders manages having child. Therefore, government should play key role in providing better childcare systems and encourage young couples to have child
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, so, still, therefore, well, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28527607362 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79342777549 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671779141104 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.76152304609 273% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.7185576859 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 114.866666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176724700318 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502310868044 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0285722258062 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0924214427887 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0167744363164 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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