In some countries, old people are highly valued, while in some cultures young people are highly valued. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There are a variety of comprehension about importance of elderly people and youngsters in these days. Some countries perceive that elderly people should stand higher social position. While it is commonly believed in other cultures that young people gain greater significance. However I contend that both of generations make considerable contribution for general growth.
One the one hand, in modern world, it is undeniable that role of elderly people is dispensable part in promoting social and economic development. First reason for this support is that older people those undergone a long period of time for working and living possess tremendous amount of experience. It is beneficial that almost youngsters those have not yet empirical knowledge may be given valuable from previous people that assists them retreat unworthy mistakes in their lives. Apart from transferring experiences, some older people are adequate capacity in order to make dedication in working. Therefore increasing effective productivity is as result of contribution from this workforce. The second prominent problem is that previous people are the solid basement for next generation when younger people encounter difficulties in their lives. In fact, elderly people frequently are good examples for later generation to imitate, this is particular motivation to youngsters show their ability and performance in progress of their country.
One the other hand, later generation need be placed more emphasis for some certain reasons.
Initially, youngsters those have overwhelming performance of physical and conscious aspects may easily acquire advanced technology of knowledge that is predictor for economic prosperity.
It is not unusual that an abundant country have tendency in reliance on future generation more than focus on elderly people due to youngster’s creativity and innovation that is appropriate demand in modern society. The second reason that is noticeable that when reaching older ages or retirement, elderly people need to be supported and become more dependent on younger generation. It is understandable that almost living burden is bear by youngster thereby concentrating on personal development with aim having sufficient in support whole family, that is reason why youngsters need to be given more attention in current society.
It seems to me that role of elderly people is played necessarily in general growth of a nation. However I am of opinion that later generation is potential workforce either creativity in working or significance in every family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, while, apart from, in fact, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 7.30460921844 260% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.3376753507 288% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2178.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62790697674 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01979527647 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540051679587 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 701.1 506.74238477 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5206141758 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05555555556 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160393531247 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592282676517 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478729726703 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.082518819612 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673713085644 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 78.4519038076 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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