Having house is one of the main requirement for anyone, human try a lot to rest and recovery his/her self and has a shield to prevent from external issue. So preparing a shelter as mentioned is vital but how to prepare is main change which discus in this essay.
Owning is one of the innate habit in individuals and each one make effort to be owner. But some countries prepare some facility that remove thinking about owning in population mind. For example if they hadn't any fear about increasing of prices therefore, they didn't force their self to accumulate and spent huge amount of money for owning. Meanwhile some nations build some equipment which encourage people to invest their income in another subject instead of housing.
obviously there is some governments where hadn't enough policy to control and make balance of price ups and down, consequently people make decision to own their house. They aware that, if they can't buy and spent a lot of money for renting surely based on incoming, buying new one in next time is difficult and maybe impossible. In this countries humans endure many problems while enduring homeless is far away.
I believe if government let people enough opportunity to invest and build new job positions, this is extremely better to invest on home and throw amount of money. In another words if people spent their money on renting instead of buying this is positive option of that nation. In the other side, people try to buy and own, it shoes that in this country people haven't sufficient confident.
All in all, renting home instead of owning depend on government policy and give them enough trust to live without fearing and thinking about feature, unfortunately week nations hasn't suitable advice to embed confidence in their nations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90365448505 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43448838578 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3316790405 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.538461538 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212184573553 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077643786703 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345830013566 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110627412281 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486507792009 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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