In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
During over thousands year, as the science developed, the living conditions of human is improved. As a results, we have created trend of favoring owing a house over renting one instead. Therefor, this essay is to find out the reasons and the nature of this phenomenon.
To begin with, having a home might be less money-consuming than paying for living monthly or annual. In some nations, the cost of renting a house might be approximately the same with affording one. So it would be much wiser and money-saving for those who have plan to save money for there future.
Along with this, in many Asian countries, in the culture aspect, owning a home is counted as being wealthy, affluent, happy and having long-term careers. Whatever life is, most Asian parents always expect their children to settle down as soon as possible so they can have grandchildren to look after as other normal family.
And in my own being a homeless experiences, owing a house is absolutely beneficial with a huge number of advantages. Having a house lets you shop easier with no worrying about how to transfer it to another accomodation afterward. In addition, should you get along on your neighbors, you will never have to worry about being lonely in holidays such as Christmas, Thanksgiving,...or life would be much easier when you need help. Also, as i have mentioned above, owning a house is beneficially economic.
Then again, it is one thing to afford a house, but it is another thing to manage it well. When you have a house, many problematic troubles may come to you with no notifications in advanced. If you cannot get well on your neighbors, you should be prepared to get complained everyday, or things even get worse when they report you to the officers. Besides, when you have kids, your loving adorable house will soon be "shattered". Kids are always commonly curious about everything and they could nastily make you go through the roof.
To sum up, it can be said that purchasing a house can make you broke for a time, but for those who have the clearly long term family plan, it is perfectly worthy. Besides, who does not want to have the own untouchable place to let their childhood dreams come true?
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'thousands'' or 'thousand's'?
Suggestion: thousands'; thousand's
During over thousands year, as the science developed, the liv...
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Line 1, column 102, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a result' or simply 'results'?
Suggestion: a result; results
...ing conditions of human is improved. As a results, we have created trend of favoring owin...
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Line 3, column 261, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'planned'.
Suggestion: planned
...ser and money-saving for those who have plan to save money for there future. Alon...
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Line 7, column 219, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...w to transfer it to another accomodation afterward. In addition, should you get a...
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Line 7, column 376, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...holidays such as Christmas, Thanksgiving,...or life would be much easier when you ...
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Line 9, column 274, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ou should be prepared to get complained everyday, or things even get worse when they rep...
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Line 9, column 376, Rule ID: YOUR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'you're' or 'you are'?
Suggestion: you're; you are
... officers. Besides, when you have kids, your loving adorable house will soon be &apo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, look, may, so, then, well, another thing, in addition, such as, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1835.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80366492147 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82443264263 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565445026178 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5936282047 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5789473684 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1052631579 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57894736842 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203300116682 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668822666774 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477263892758 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107713928217 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374867817148 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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