In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
In many nations, it is more crucial for their citizens to possess a home more than rent one. This essay will identify some reasons for this phenomenon and present my opinion about whether this is beneficial or not.
There are some reasons that make people want to own a home more than pay monthly fees to live in it temporarily. Firstly, in some coutry, there is a traditional view that having a house proves the soundness of a person's financial security. If they do not show this, they might not meet the common expectation of society and their boyfriend or girlfriend as well. Therefore they might not be able to get marriaged. Secondly, buying an apartment means the buyers possess it forever while after a long time of paying rental fees, people renting an apartment do not reap any benefits from the amount of money anymore . Many people consider the monthly fee a waste .
Thus, they are ready to borrow a huge loan to purchase an apartment although this brings them a burden to pay back the loan for tens of years. This narrows the people's chances of changing a new job or moving to another city because they need to keep their job to earn stable salaries to be able to pay the loan on a monthly basis. Additionally, this habit leads to the fact that many parents want to buy more houses for their children in the future while they do not need them at the time they purchase. As a result, the prices of real estate increase significantly and young people who do not have the assistance from previous generations are less likely to have a home though they have real need to use it. In my opinion, the habit of owning a home rather than renting one causes above negative consequences.
In short, some people's preference of owning a home to renting one results from their view on financial issues and their social expectation. Personally, I think this routine have bad outcomes such as contributing to the rise in prices of real estate and causing difficulties for the youth who have the need to buy a home.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 210, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a person' or simply 'persons'?
Suggestion: a person; persons
... having a house proves the soundness of a persons financial security. If they do not show...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 363, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... their boyfriend or girlfriend as well. Therefore they might not be able to get marriaged...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 612, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...enefits from the amount of money anymore . Many people consider the monthly fee a ...
^^
Line 2, column 659, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... people consider the monthly fee a waste . Thus, they are ready to borrow a huge...
^^
Line 4, column 16, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
... negative consequences. In short, some peoples preference of owning a home to renting ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, i think, in short, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57617728532 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49203666097 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523545706371 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7569773843 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.133333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73333333333 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312940725134 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108560194082 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589253995627 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210328359266 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273043313851 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 210, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a person' or simply 'persons'?
Suggestion: a person; persons
... having a house proves the soundness of a persons financial security. If they do not show...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 363, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... their boyfriend or girlfriend as well. Therefore they might not be able to get marriaged...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 612, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...enefits from the amount of money anymore . Many people consider the monthly fee a ...
^^
Line 2, column 659, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... people consider the monthly fee a waste . Thus, they are ready to borrow a huge...
^^
Line 4, column 16, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
... negative consequences. In short, some peoples preference of owning a home to renting ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, i think, in short, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57617728532 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49203666097 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523545706371 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7569773843 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.133333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73333333333 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312940725134 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108560194082 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589253995627 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210328359266 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273043313851 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.