Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both sides of the view and give your opinion.
For centuries, human beings have exploited animals and plants for their life. So far, the more human civilization develops, the more animals and plants suffer from human activity. Some people claim that this trend cannot be reversed while others, including me, are optimistic that we can improve the situation with suitable actions.
Pessimists think that human beings cannot stop their harmful activities towards plants and animals because of the public indifference to the issue and employment as two main hurdles. If every industry that has harmful influence on animals and plants were forced to be stopped, it would be impossible to create millions of new jobs for workers who were fired from those fields. For example, although millions of livestock are slaughtered everyday, this feeds more than 55 million employees working in this industry around the world, according to a study published in 2020. Furthermore, the majority of the world population is too busy dealing with their daily problems, such as raising their children and traffic congestions, to concern the interest of animals and plants. For instance, a survey conducted in 2019 shows that in developing countries, 85 percent of deforestation plans reached consensus among local communities because they brought them economic benefit to overcome poverty.
Although admitting aforementioned difficulties, optimists believe education in favor of and raising public awareness of plant and animal protection can produce notable improvement in this issue. If children are nurtured with love for plants and animals surrounding them instead of the greed to make profit at any cost, obviously in the future, they are less likely to earn money by trafficking endangered animals or accepting construction of hydroelectric power plants, which requires the destruction of square hectares of forest. Moreover, by increasingly informed the public of evidence suggesting that many activities damaging to plants and animals also impair our life quality, our society can have more motivations to adjust each individual’s behaviors, finding a way for both human beings and plants and animals to thrive. For instance, because sea pollution reduces not only the population of sea creatures but also profit from fishing, it is reasonable for fisherman to save the sea environment.
In conclusion, while unemployment and the lack of concern for animals and plants do not allow modern society to stop hurting animals and plants, developing children’s attachment to and heightening the public consciousness of animal and plant protection can be first steps to be taken to bring about a change.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 437, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...h millions of livestock are slaughtered everyday, this feeds more than 55 million employ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2236.0 1615.20841683 138% => OK
No of words: 409.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46699266504 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89224589064 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579462102689 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 681.3 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.6879526575 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 172.0 106.682146367 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.4615384615 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265333072142 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.099785564073 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667520222696 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184047120722 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401335460796 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.04 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 437, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...h millions of livestock are slaughtered everyday, this feeds more than 55 million employ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2236.0 1615.20841683 138% => OK
No of words: 409.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46699266504 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89224589064 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579462102689 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 681.3 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.6879526575 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 172.0 106.682146367 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.4615384615 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265333072142 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.099785564073 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667520222696 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184047120722 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401335460796 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.04 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.