In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case. Do you think this is a positive or negative situation.
In this money-driven world, people tend to judge others by their material possessions. Because of that, these last several decades have witnessed a staggering rise in the rate of properties being purchased in lieu of being rented. And from my perspective, there are 2 main reasons that can be attributable to this trend.
To begin with, having a residence allows people to have an independent life. The key rationale is that people can live their life without being at the mercy of the landlord. For example, they have the autonomy of modifying their own house with no fear of violating the renting contract for damaging the walls, thus making it a cozy place in which that they can feel a sense of security and familiarity. Moreover, not only is a house a place to reside, it represents the owner's social status. The size of the house is proportional with people's wealth. Inherently, it acts as an one of the most evident yardsticks of an individual’s success and well-being., The facts outlined above, it is largely justifiable why people in our society place significant importance on possessing a residence.
However, whether owning a house is a positive situation still maintains controversy as it is due to each individual's circumstance. If people fully had financial capability to afford a residence as well as to cover different types of expenditures that come along with it, owning a house would probably be strongly desirable. On the contrary, if some middle class families bought a big house, which is often out of their budget, with a view to meeting the social standard then that house would become a detriment to their financial resource. In order to be eligible to purchase the house, these people will take out huge loans and eventually end up repaying the amount over an enduring period of time when the interest has already increased exponentially. In addition to this, they also have to pay property taxes and insurance, not to mention the maintenance costs and other daily expenses.
In conclusion, although having a house as a personal asset is of great importance, it is not the key determinant to lead a pleasant life. Only when buying a house within a budget is that a sound investment. Otherwise, it could turn into a a drain on a person’s finance when the loan they get is beyond their repaying capacity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...that can be attributable to this trend. To begin with, having a residence allows...
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... that people can live their life without being at the mercy of the landlord. For ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, still, then, thus, well, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1947.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90428211587 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89692913532 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581863979849 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 620.1 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3838864816 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.529411765 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3529411765 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159339622787 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476602900548 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346221199911 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0896612696601 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526255109126 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 322, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...that can be attributable to this trend. To begin with, having a residence allows...
^^^
Line 2, column 138, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... that people can live their life without being at the mercy of the landlord. For ...
^^
Line 2, column 576, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... peoples wealth. Inherently, it acts as an one of the most evident yardsticks of a...
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Line 2, column 683, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d well-being., The facts outlined above, it is largely justifiable why people in ...
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Line 3, column 684, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...up repaying the amount over an enduring period of time when the interest has already increased...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...enance costs and other daily expenses. In conclusion, although having a house as ...
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Line 4, column 237, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: a
...vestment. Otherwise, it could turn into a a drain on a person’s finance when the lo...
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Line 4, column 237, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...vestment. Otherwise, it could turn into a a drain on a person’s finance when the ...
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Line 4, column 237, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: a; a
...vestment. Otherwise, it could turn into a a drain on a person’s finance when the lo...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, still, then, thus, well, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1947.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90428211587 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89692913532 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581863979849 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 620.1 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3838864816 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.529411765 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3529411765 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159339622787 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476602900548 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346221199911 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0896612696601 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526255109126 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.