In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
For people in few countries, to buy a home at once is more important than to pay rent for it frequently.
It seems to be very difficult to buy a home since it might cost a lot of money at the first place but
liberation and flexibility are also the important concern of human nature which might be refrained in case
of renting it.
Firstly, In my opinion, it may be considered both a positive as well as negative situation since both have merits and
demerits of their own.
People owning a house has lots of benefits because they could do anything within the house premises, more specifically the
people who have small kids with themself will be more secure and may don't have to worry about the disturbance that might
occur due to the activities of children which might be the serious concern for the people renting a house because they might not be
single-family in the entire house.
Secondly, To talk in the merit side of the rented house, I consider it as the best approach in an immediate change of plan
and action since life is so uncertain that anything can change and drag an individual from one side to the next side of the world.
For example, a government employee may have to move from one state to the next since it is the rule of the system itself that one may have to shift to the next area as a need and demand of the government. From this point of view, it might not be very convenient for such
professionals to have a house in one place where he might be able to be around with his family for the rest of his entire life.
Therefore, I want to conclude that both the choices as to buy and rent the house have their own advantages and consequences at the same place. It depends on the situation of any individual and perhaps there may be one other important concerning factor so-called as
"Economic condition".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53550295858 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60869079668 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497041420118 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.8075777542 49.4020404114 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 170.333333333 106.682146367 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.5555555556 20.7667163134 181% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.3333333333 7.06120827912 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 15.0 4.38176352705 342% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312835634823 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12633669481 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663510553557 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0936303449344 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061693665714 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 11.3001002004 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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